Thursday, October 27, 2011

Outline of Thesis & Topic Sentences

Thesis:
Celebrities' bad behavior is covered more in news stories than postive behavior because people like drama, it brings more attention, & it shows how celebrities dont live up to the good expectations

Topic Sentence 1:
First, celebrities' bad behavior is covered more than positive behavior because people like drama.

Topic Sentence 2:
Second, the bad behavior brings more attention to celebrites.

Topic Sentence 3:
Last, the bad behavior shows how celebrities dont live up to the good expectations

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